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Gaasaku-Hatred chapter.1 by ~DeiSaku4ever:iconDeiSaku4ever:



GAASAKU -A BIG HATRED OF A HEART...
          CHAPTER ONE

"...Sakura,are you still thinking about sasuke?"Sakura's blonde friend named Ino asked...

"NO!OF COURSE NOT!!!-"the pink haired konoichi yelled..

"-sakura! you've got to get over him!"

"its-it-s not ea-sy...."

"sakura..-"
Ino's voice was cut by Ino's boyfriend...Sai...
"hey,ino c'mon lets go..."

"well,sakura...at least this time...you've got to forget him...or else that pain in side your heart will turn black and hard as a rock...-a heart full with hatred..."ino said to sakura before she left...

*AFTER THAT DAY*

"hmn...."Sakura wakes up unwell still thinking about sasuke.
"Ino's right...i- have to get out of this--horrible,sad feeling.."

walks out of her bed takes a bath,dresses herself,walking outside her sorrowful room...

"-..i promise and vow to myself...that starting this day forward...i will find a way...to cover this piece of sorrow buried under my hopeless heart...-"She said as teardrops fell from her miserable life....

She walks by the side of the street...
A man noticed her...Sakura noticed him too looking at her...

"Gaa-ra.."sakura said to herself...

"what are you doing walking sadly beside the street?"Gaara asked with a gentle voice..

"i--i- was just-- talking a stroll.."

"Hn...seems to me that you've been thinking something...something dreadful isnt it?..forgetting someone you love is hard...its like throwing and burning a picture of youre most beloved family...that you thought he loved and cared about you...but inside of his heart was a big hatred of you...-"

"w-hat ar-e you trying to say?..."Sakura asked tring to get his point...

"I understand what you feel,Sakura Haruno...because...i also lose someone i love and thought he feels the same way..."

"who?-.."

"all the members of my family...."

"?..."Sakura looks down and tries to understand what gaara meant...
©2008-2009 ~DeiSaku4ever
:icondeisaku4ever:

Author's Comments

GaaSaku....
oh..i hope you like it...my cousin said I suck in making fic. like this...oh well...i still hope you like it...

to be honest...i was listening to sad love songs when i was writing this thats why i kinda think it was sad...:giggle:

and yeah...i have a Saiino pairing i really dont like them but my cousin said that i should put that pairing on my fic. coz if i dont he'll have to take my allowance for a week! how damn SH*T would that be?!!!

...well...here it is!..more to come!...im still writing more
..well see yah..!:wave:

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:iconfluffyninja12:
how do you post a fan fiction?

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WHY MUST YOU A ABUSE ME WITH YOUR WORDS AND HARD BRICKS~~!
:icondeisaku4ever:
simple just write a fic on ur notepad and then save it...
then go to ur submit dev. and then click the button submit...done!^^

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NO amount of theraphy will EVER make this OKAY
O_o *LOL*
:iconfluffyninja12:
wow thank you
^w^

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WHY MUST YOU A ABUSE ME WITH YOUR WORDS AND HARD BRICKS~~!
:icondeisaku4ever:
np..^.~

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NO amount of theraphy will EVER make this OKAY
O_o *LOL*
:iconbluharunoblssm13:
Don't let your cousin say you suck! You don't, this is actually really good. The grammar just confused me a tad. . . >.>
Ah, well. Can't wait to read the next chapter! ^^

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WHY?
I'll tell you WHY.

JUST FOR SHITS AND GIGGLES. THAT'S WHY. D<
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They wanted you, but you were dead. . . .
So I would have to do instead.

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